Two poems expressing the same idea. I think the second one is stronger. What do you think?
I find it strange the sun
shines as I go to bed.
Troubles of summer.
Responsible me
lie down and rise by the clock
summer sun beam on
Perhaps you couldn't find enough haiku poems to feed your mind. In this quiet space you can preview what may end up in my next book.
Thursday, April 30, 2015
Monday, April 6, 2015
4-2-15
stories are powerful
delightful word choice
laugh, cry, instruct, heal.
writing haiku while holding still
draw my picture
the mind plays
hold still!
delightful word choice
laugh, cry, instruct, heal.
writing haiku while holding still
draw my picture
the mind plays
hold still!
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